HAVE YOUR SAY: Strapline

I'm am currently reviewing the strapline for the comic, I want to make it punchy and include all the key elements of the comic. 

The current one is:


"Unabridged, historically rich graphic novel of the Bible with a high view of scripture." 

I define the three main selling points of the project to be:

  • Unabridged: Not missing one word from the biblical text. This is a trustworthy, faithful and authentic rendering. 

  • Rich historical and geographical setting: In depth research and landscapes from real locations give a rich historic and cultural setting.

  • Aimed at an adult market 15+: Telling the stories exactly as they are written, the material will not be tamed for young readers so that the full impact of the narrative can be felt.

In my proposal I rewrote it to be:


The Word for Word Bible Comic will enthral adult readers with the untamed, full word of God using hard-hitting imagery and historical accuracy.


Which is not exactly the same because it is an introductory statement. The strapline I want to create now will go under the title, so it doesn't need "The Word for Word Bible comic is-" in it. 

The words I would like to use are: 

Untamed - to represent the fact it is not watered down for children and is aimed at ages 15+. I can't really use the word "adult" on it's own however as that implies an even higher age category.

Hard hitting- is good to convey the action and excitement with in the stories that people might not be expecting the find. 

Also , It has to mention being Historically accurate some how because this is one of the main selling points for the non-christian market.

It needs to have to unabridged part mentioned as this is the main point of the project as a whole. 

The reason i included the "with a High view of Scripture" is to show it is a faithful representation of the text not a parody or anything like that. 

Untamed and unabridged obviously both start with "un-" so they go quite well together but i'm finding it hard to get a sentence to follow that strong start. 

For example...

Untamed, unabridged graphic novel of the Bible (that is historically accurate) 

Unabridged, historically rich graphic novel of the Bible with a high view of scripture.

It could be super short if the important parts are covered but this is even harder. 

Hard hitting, untamed and unabridged - (but this does not mention historically accurate) 

Historically accurate, unabridged and untamed. 

You get the idea. Please get a thesaurus out with me and see what combinations and suggestions you can make.

Have your say: "What to Do Moving Forward" and Progress Update (June 2015)

Progress and News

Here is your monthly progress report, bringing you up to date with how the work is going.

I've now officially gone past the section I had already completed from the Samson chapters (13-16), which is very encouraging as I am currently doing the pencil drawing for Chapter 19 of the 21 Chapters; it is the final storyline in the book too.

In order to complete the work by my target of September, I have taken on a second colourist, who will complete the Jephthah story for me (Chapters 10-12). So please welcome Ryan Esch, 26 from Michigan to the team. He did a great job months ago when I gave the prospective colourists a test page and I'm so glad to be able to go back to him and get him on board.

Once I've finished preparing all the pages for colours I will colour what is left, so that hopefully with the three of us working furiously over (probably) July and August, we will make it to the end of Judges on time.

June 2105 Progress Chart

June 2105 Progress Chart

Regarding publishing 

I am still pursuing publishers at the moment, with three direct applications through referrals that I am hopeful about and I have also applied to three Literary agents in order to reach the largest of publishers, who don't accept direct submissions.

I'd like to say a big thank you to Susanne Wildig and Nick Brooking who've helped me polish up my proposal for this.

I still have the option to self publish in order to get the project off the ground but this will be more costly and more effort up front so I'm hoping that a professional publisher will take care of it all this for me as well as ensure the comic has the widest audience possible.

Please pray that I get a publishing deal in good time.
 

What to do moving forward?

I am approaching both the end of creating of the Book of Judges comic, and the end of the funding from Kickstarter. I am trying to decide what to do next, in order to keep the project going and funded, either through sales or other means.

In September-November time the funding from the original Kickstarter runs out. I must say it is all thanks to my amazing wife that this 14K* has lasted us these nearly 18 months, with her PT wage, budgeting and saving money. (*= The total, minus Kickstarter fees and fulfilments.)

Although I will have the product ready at the end of the funding, the problem will be that if I do not have a publisher, more time will be needed to be spent to releasing the book and I may have to go back to a normal job in the gap between then and when the book starts making it's own money.

Things to consider...

Now I have been told by a publisher that you sell most of your sales straight after the launch, so it is important to have a strong, clear launch time. The reason this is relevant is because I was considering releasing the project digitally first, then in print later. It's also relevant because if I self-publish and can't get enough promotion and inertia, a professional publisher may lose interest as they are releasing a product which is already available.

Secondly, think is the Kickstarter backers who have given very generously and I don't want to invalidate their gift because they (you) are the reason I will have a complete 116 page graphic novel to take to market. Some of the options below may appear to dishonour their (your) gift, or my commitment to release the book by a certain date.

You might wonder why I don't get published by a little publisher, which is an option but I was advised against this as small publishers can often only promote and sell the book as well as you can yourself and they claim over half the profits.

Here are a few options I have...

Option 1: Hold on for a publisher: In order for the project to reach people all over the world with the Word of God, I will need a publisher who knows what they are doing and can promote it through established channels and sell co-editions round the globe. Although I haven't had anyone sign the project yet, it has been discussed by some big publishers already which, as my father-in-law pointed out, is pretty good sign as most author's books don't get a second look. Therefore, we just keep praying and applying and wait for a break through. If nothing comes by September time I get a job and keep trying to get it signed until I succeed.

Option 2: Concentrate on self publishing : In this option I don't look for more external funding,. Instead I would work part time for a wage and use the rest of my time to promote and sell the comic as well as go to Christian conventions and Comic Cons to sell it myself. The danger as I mentioned above is that if I can't make it a relatively big success, my chances of getting a significant publishing deal later on may be damaged.

Options 3 : Do a second smaller Kickstarter for book two: It's not unusual for successful Kickstarter projects to return for a second book or related project, and often do well as they know what to do and have followers already. An advantage is that I would have something to reward the backers with straight away (book one) as well as the prospective book two at the end. The Kickstarter will hopefully create a buzz for the release of book one just before it's released and (if self published) can help pay for the upfront printing costs of book one and keep us off the street by using the funding to create the second book. The second book I plan is Ruth which is a short book compared to Judges (4 chapters instead of 21) so the target would probably be significantly less around £5K instead of the £15K it was last time. In this scenario I might not release the book to the public straight away but would be able to fulfil the promised copies to the Kickstarter backers as a special limited run.

Option 4 : Set up a subscription funding campaign: A bit like Kickstarter but there is not end goal and people give an amount every month and build up credits for rewards over time. Patreon is probably the best example of this. This could work well but I think it would be harder to get people involved in than a short sharp Kickstarter, but then again it doesn't stop so you have more time to collect supporters.

In essence I need to decide if I should hold on for a publisher or bite the bullet and self publish, and whether I should look for external funding again or not.

Thanks for reading. Please do give your options and advise, don't hold back, I'd love to hear lots of responses and ideas on what to do next.


Progress Update April 2015

Here is the progress chart as it stands now at the start of April. 

Progress chart for the Word for Word bible comic Judges April 2015

This week I have had a bit of a hiccup with my PC, but not data was lost just a bit of time figuring out how to fix it. It seem to be up and running again now though, thank the Lord. 

I'm just finishing off the first page of chapter 10 ready for colouring now, but as chapter 10 has only two and a bit pages I'm looking forward to that bit of pie changing colour soon too. 

My goal each week is to complete three pages ready for colouring; which is what I need to complete Judges before the money runs out, so no pressure. 

This month one of my favoured publishers will be taking my project to their review board to see if they are interested in publishing the work. So please pray this goes ahead and I can stop concerning myself with thoughts of publishers. They review it on April 20th. 

Thank you, to everyone who gave their opinion on the latest "Have your Say" blog.  Please keep an eye out for these as I love hearing your opinions.  

Here's a little cartoon I found on FB, which amused me, if you are familiar with the Footprints poem it may amuse you also. 



HAVE YOUR SAY: WHICH IS MORE DRAMATIC

In this scene Abimelech torches a temple stronghold containing a thousand men and woman. (Judges 9:45-49)  Look at the two option which show how I could dramatise this below (rough). Then read the different cases underneath.

Abimelech burns down the temple stronghold (Judges 9:49) 

If you can't read the text on the image this is what it says... 

 "Abimelech was told that all the men of the tower of Shechem were gathered together.  Abimelech went up to Mount Zalmon, he and all the people who were with him; and Abimelech took an ax in his hand, and cut down a bough from the trees, and took it up, and laid it on his shoulder. Then he said to the people who were with him, “What you have seen me do, make haste, and do as I have done!”  All the people likewise each cut down his bough, and followed Abimelech, //and put them at the base of the stronghold, //and set the stronghold on fire on them; so that all the people of the tower of Shechem died also, about a thousand men and women." (Judges 9:47-49 WEB)     (//=show where the divide in the text could be. )

Option 1: The Stronghold Burns

Straight forward rendering of the text you see the stronghold burn in all it's glory. The black panel tells you how many died.

Option 2: Impending Doom.

Less straight forward the picture shows the situation of impending doom and it is the black panel which delivers the death knell.

Which is better in your opinion?

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Very exciting news! Terry Virgo: Founder of Newfrontiers endorsement

Very exciting news! 

Terry Virgo founder of Newfrontiers has agreed to give The Word for Word Bible Comic his endorsement!

This is an amazing blessing and I hope this will give buyers the confidence to trust the comic and have no fear of it being an ill conceived or unfaithful version of the Biblical text. 

With the help of the leader of my church, Simon Walker, I got Terry's agreement that I could send him a sample and he would look at it and decide if he would endorse it. Then a few weeks ago Terry came to Bristol for a small Newfrontiers church weekend. I got to talk to him there and he was happy to support it. 

He is so humble and is, himself, not sure his name will make any difference, but I'm sure you'll agree that his name and positive words (below) will carry great weight the the "true to the Text" claim of the comic.

The statement... 

"The Word for Word Bible Comic is immediately arresting and I cannot help being impressed by the thoroughgoing commitment to research and the Biblical text in order to make it as accurate as possible." 

Terry Virgo: Founder of Newfrontiers, a family of Word and Spirit churches with over a 1000 churches in over 70 nations 

 Please pray with me that this endorsement will help the project reach an even greater audience once it is released and to open doors with publishers and other well-know Christians who will give their endorsement also. 

Terry was one of two trusted bible teachers who corrected my thinking on Samson and his appearance; I was all set to draw him as an incredible hulk, but as they pointed out the Philistines ask "See if you can lure him into showing you the secret of his great strength..." Judges 16:5, which of course would not make sense if he looked like Superman or as some Jewish legendary hyperbole state Samson's shoulders were sixty cubits broad. So it was great to be able to show him the comic with the slight Samson empowered exclusively by the Holy Spirit.

Samson empowered by the Holy Spirit - Link to Blog about Terry Virgo.

Below is a portrait I did of Terry which I also gave to him (framed without logo), and is hopefully hanging in his office somewhere. 

Please comment below your thoughts about this endorsement, especially if you were not familiar with Terry Virgo before reading this post.

Progress update

It's been a little while since the last blog, mainly this is due to spending all my time creating the comic. Someone messaged me keen to know how far along the project is, so I've created this progress pie chart which I will try and post once a month. 

White represents the parts that have not been started except for having the storyboard ready. The dark colour is completed, the light cyan is complete except the colouring and pale is the part I am currently pencilling and inking. 

Progress Pie Chart for the Word for Word Bible Comic Feb 2015

Progress Pie Chart for the Word for Word Bible Comic Feb 2015

My aim is to complete the whole book by the end of this summer. 

Please pray for productivity, accuracy, wise choices and for the right publisher to be signed in good time for the book to be released soon after completion. 

Also please pray that the high profile people I contact about endorsements are keen to give their support. 

Thank you to all the backers and followers of this project. 

Have your Say: From the sky the stars fought

I am currently completing the final copies of the pages of Judges 4 and 5, the story of Deborah and Barak's battle against Sisera. In the song of Deborah she and Barak describe what happened in the battle in poetic language.

One verse stands out, it is intriguing and not entirely clear what is meant :

“From the heavens the stars fought,
    from their courses they fought against Sisera.”
Judges 5:20 (NIV)

(See the verse in context and with parallel translations here)

Commentator and scholars are divided over the interpretation of this verse, but it basically breaks down into two camps: those that think this means angels fought in the battle against Sisera's army and those that believe it means something else.

The reason commentators are divided is because angels are referred to as stars in other parts of the Bible (Daniel 8:10, Jude 1:13, Revelation 1:20, Job 38:7). So it is a possibility; but it's not mentioned in any other way in these two chapters and so other commentators feel it should be interpreted as natural stars or as lightning, or as other natural phenomena. Also, angels do fight or at least muster in battles in other parts of the Bible (Isaiah 37:36, Revelation 12:7, 2 Kings 6:14-17, Matt 26:53).

You can see a range of commentaries here (and links across the top of this page to even more commentaries)

Also I would not be the first to depict the battle this way here is one example...

The Defeat of Sisera : Luca Giordan 1692

The Defeat of Sisera : Luca Giordan 1692

So the question is whether I should draw in the angels on my comic.

If I do draw in the angels...

If I do draw them in I will have categorically sided with the “angels interpretation”, it is a view consistent with the rest or the Bible but as it is uncertain perhaps it should be left ambiguous. On the other hand this is a comic and the more exciting it is for the readers the better (especially those just dipping their toe into the Bible with the comic). Having the angels there looks cool (as you'll see below) but it make the comic a little bit more interpretational.

It should be noted that the image below is the only image in which the angels would appear, there are not lines and lines of angels fighting men, just this one image where, as the lightning strikes, we (the reader) glimpse them there. The cyan colour and the fact they are mostly transparent also communicates (within the comic's language) that they are not seen by the humans only by the comic reader, exactly like in the verse mentioned above  (2 Kings 6:17).

If I do not draw in the angels...

If I do not draw them I am gently siding with the “naturalistic interpretation” but not exclusively as the angels could still be there but just invisible. This way of doing things is more in line with the normal way I treat the text when creating the comic. The general rule I have is...

If it's clear = draw it that way

If it's ambiguous but another part of the Bible clarifies it = make it clear

If it's ambiguous but all the trustworthy commentator agree = make it strongly implied

If it's ambiguous and commentator have differing interpretations = make it as ambiguous as the text.

By that rationale it should not be explicitly drawn, but is that the best way?

So what should I do?

Look at the pictures compared below and give me your opinion on what you think a word-for-word bible comic should do, play it safe or have cool angels?

Battle without visible angels

Battle without visible angels

Battle with visible angels

Battle with visible angels

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